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Caption: Video Game tg by TheXtra89 Caption: Video Game tg by TheXtra89
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My first and probably last caption. I sort of just did this for fun. I had this idea in my head for a while, but I didn't want to make it into a full comic (too much time). I used to like captions a lot, but I don't really look at them anymore. Don't expect too much from me in this area (especially since I don't like using other people's artwork in my own gallery).

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sallyane Featured By Owner Edited Jan 2, 2015
great cap its a great theme wouild love for you to carry on its great skill well done
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orangeglasses2 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
I wanna know what that last penalty is.
That's why hard games are emulated with save states.
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sometimes your imagination is better than something I can come up with ;).
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natsuthing Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Yes but no but yes but no but yes but no but i guess the last penalty is their personality changing to fit their bodys....
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DragonSlayer518 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What's the last penalty?
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YouWontGetWhatYouSee Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
haha first caption I actually like. (By The Way that`s why you leave games like this to the pros! * points at self* )
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eleventhdr Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i just do so love plaid pleated skirts with full little girly panties and half silps the skirts should always be just about knee length so that your now cute pretty legs will b e showing not to long otherwise you would ruin the whole effect of being a girly in skirts you should at the very least be in a training bra so this to would help a grat deal oh and if you swere once a boy even alll the better!
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giygas1 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
Kihihahahahaha! That was beautiful! I love watching fools get this kind of treatment! Kihihihahahahahaha!(if this seems weird, I'm a bit :crazy:, also, I am curious as to what the 3rd penalty is)
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Vampir2005 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Nice one
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:iconbackgroundcharacter2:
Id like to buy this game as a present for my friend.
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:iconpokemon381:
Pokemon381 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
is this game available on PS3?
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:iconmagicalbunnylisa:
MagicalBunnyLisa Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Filmographer
so cute i like their uniforms ^^ they make cure school girls :3
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Zehanort1313 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012
I know what the last penalty would be: a slight mental and orientation change. They'd start to like more girly things and act more girly, but they still would remember who they are etc.
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MetaKaios Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012
'tv' should be 'TV', and 'serously' should be 'seriously'
Apart from that you're good.
Also, you could have posted this as a text deviation, with the picture as the preview. It'd be easier to edit the text that way.
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks (fixed). I know I could have done that, but I prefer the story directly attached to the picture (even if editing is a pain).
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yellow33445566 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012
they are so much cuter now
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mhtg Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012   General Artist
very good you should do more caps maybe do an art trade thing w/ various not to well known deviants while its their art you can give suggestions
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Student Writer
Cute picture, and i love the story too.
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eleventhdr Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i lve this you play a video game and end up a girl and your freids become girls to i want this game so i can transform and ecome a little girl in cute pretty little girls dreses and skirts even right down to my panties!
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luvinanime25 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
i love it. lol
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Rustycrowbar Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I haven't never liked much this kind of tgs, because they seem lacking something.
But I have to say that this isn't that bad.
By the way, isn't it "receive" instead of "recieve"
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know what you mean. I felt really lazy not using my own drawings. I prefer a before and after picture as well (just to be able to see the change).
Thanks (off to go fix the mistake).
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
Hmm, well now I am wondering what the "last penalty" is if they fail to continue, what more can it do to them... ;P
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, I'm sure there's a lot that could happen ;). Use your imagination (it's open ended for a reason).
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
Hmm... still, could be interesting to see a canon follow-up. =P
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luvinanime25 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
the last penalty is that the changes are permanent. lol great caption
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Paulthored Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
:thumbsup:

:D 9.5 out of 10 :D
:star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star-half:

Not EPIC + AWESOME caption, But better than most, where the only thing holding intrest is the picture, not the caption.
Suggestion/comment: first time through, i had some trouble following the plot/action. don't know what could be done, as i'm sure its partly my fault/from my end, but you may want to consider establishing the characters more.
also- the two with controllers look like sisters.

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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Writing a caption is a bit different than making a comic. I wanted to keep is somewhat short, so I just focused on the cause of the transformation and the transformation itself rather than develop the characters. I just wanted to give it a try.
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Wowza48 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is epic!
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foxpower93 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The picture you take for the story is really good, one of the girl actually look like she afraid (even if it because the tv is falling XD)
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98sparkz Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student Artist
I sure wouldn't want to know what the last penalty is...
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SebastiansSire Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is freaking hilarious!!!! I love the subtle tg change also the humor I like it!!!
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