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My Girlfriend's Notebook tg Full by TheXtra89 My Girlfriend's Notebook tg Full by TheXtra89
Story/Commission by: :icontarget-locked:
Outline/art: me

Here is the full comic. After nine months, it's finally finished. Hope you like it.

Page 1: fav.me/d6bez02
Page 2: fav.me/d6chaoi
Page 3: fav.me/d6gmefl
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:iconandyofindiana:
AndyofIndiana Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist
The moral of the story is that if you come across a paper to detail your ideal girlfriend, fill it out as if you are going to turn into the girl describe because that very well might happen.

By the way, I wonder if white-out could work in this situation.
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:iconshinpersonamaster:
ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
wonderful work.
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:iconsabrinchen:
Sabrinchen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
gorgeous book - i'd love to have this - of cause i would use pencil :D

very great story and beautful illustration
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:iconsallyane:
sallyane Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
great picture caption many thanks
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:iconmetalgearalchemist7:
Metalgearalchemist7 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014
I love the passive expressions the boyfriend has. It's like, 'Oh look, my girlfriend just turned me into a woman. Meh'.
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:iconpineapples231:
Pineapples231 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
Number one buzzkill: Scrap the pen off the paper.
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:icondragonlover553:
Dragonlover553 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
White out, perhaps?
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:iconsallyane:
sallyane Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
great captions thanks for the links to the rest well worth reading
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:iconxxxthebudxxx:
xxXTheBudXxx Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Cool
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:iconlonefox95:
lonefox95 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great comic here. Funny and sexy, with one of the sexiest girls you've drawn to date. I'd share what I would write in the noteboo but maybe another time.
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:icondinomaster75:
Dinomaster75 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
This is exactly what I would put if I had that book! Except the name & breast size (which would be a D cup)
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:iconzaitanos:
Zaitanos Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Interesting Book, i know what i would write.
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:iconanimeviewer66:
animeviewer66 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I want that book ^^
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:iconbigbob58:
bigbob58 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
great job
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:iconpowerzzz21:
powerzzz21 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you could use Liquid Paper or White-Out...
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:iconunit1138:
unit1138 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist
I got it, you could get the page wet and hope the ink runs off.
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:icontheenderwolf:
TheEnderWolf Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Or could use white off.
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:iconunit1138:
unit1138 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist
naw, that would only cover it up
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:iconniosaki:
Niosaki Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
I love it :)
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:iconrotipher:
Rotipher Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
Well done!
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:iconpurpledude111:
PurpleDude111 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
Really nice comic. If he's 5'6"... how short's his girlfriend. XD
This comic is just awesome I can't describe how much I enjoyed reading this one. Nice job.
Out of curiosity though, would white-out work if he ever felt like changing back?
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah... 5'6"... Probably not. I'll probably fix that later on to make more sense. I'm glad you liked it; always nice to hear. 
Oh, and no, white-out doesn't work because it only covers up the ink. There might be a way to change back, but it seemed he doesn't want to.
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:iconpurpledude111:
PurpleDude111 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
I figured the same thing on the subject of white out.
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:iconcapinanarchy:
capinanarchy Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice art work. I dig your style of manga also the coloring is most excellent
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, glad to be of service.
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:iconunit1138:
unit1138 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist
I like the way you draw shirts Xtra, it's like her boobs are just barely contained.
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:iconcrushermach3:
Crushermach3 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Hey, X. Mind giving my previous comment chain a once-over?
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, I did form some rules, but there can be loopholes. This a simple story for the characters and transformation, not the rules for the item. (By the way, I made these before I made the comic)
1. Each person can only have one page. Ripping that out or destroying it makes the change permanent.
2. For the change to be removed, the writing has to be removed. Crossing out or covering up does not work. 
3. You can make adjustments to previous changes, but it has to be after the writing on the same line, but it can't contradict itself (or if it does, the change might be really weird). You can't cover up the writing with other writing.

I'm sure someone will come up with a loophole for him to change back, but the fact is he does not want to. Hope this helps a bit. 
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:iconcrushermach3:
Crushermach3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Thanks much. :)
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:iconpapahex:
PapaHex Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
/em begins searching for notebooks of every variety.  ^_^ Watch me find a Death Note or something like that lol. 
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:iconkyoshira71:
kyoshira71 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Awesome job on the comic. Liked the simple transformation concept and the pics.
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:iconorangeglasses2:
orangeglasses2 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
White-out would just make it worse, wouldn't it?hmm
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:icongeneticrepoman:
GeneticRepoMan Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I want that notebook.

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:iconflirty-fiona:
flirty-fiona Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
bet there are a lot of boys who would lke this note book
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:icongobbie2:
Gobbie2 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice, very good!
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:iconcrushermach3:
Crushermach3 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
Would crossing it out work?
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nope. Same as white-out, it only covers it up
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:iconcrushermach3:
Crushermach3 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
How about tearing the page out and burning it?:onfire:
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:iconhomerman76:
Homerman76 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Or write himself back to normal since the notebook can change the user into anything
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:iconcrushermach3:
Crushermach3 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
But then it would have two sets of contradicting information for the same person.
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:iconhomerman76:
Homerman76 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Not if it's on the next page and the old one is removed.
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:iconcrushermach3:
Crushermach3 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
That's basically my idea + adding stuff afterwards.
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:iconhomerman76:
Homerman76 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
but burning just does the same as crossing it out, so you must also write on the next page to activate a new transformation, or something along those lines, all I know is magical items are pretty complex xD
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:iconlucyfire71:
lucyfire71 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle:

:clap:

Funny! I like it!
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:icondefiantviewer:
DefiantViewer Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Awww.... I wish there were more stories like this. Cute, simple concept, and cute artwork. Perfect combination. Also, Liz must be pretty short if this guy made himself 5' 6"
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sav8197 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
good job
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:iconkiroku09:
Kiroku09 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice story, can you tell me where i can find one of those books..... Please?
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:iconpurplearcanist:
purplearcanist Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
look in the TG section of the library :)
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:iconkiroku09:
Kiroku09 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've looked there, all that i found there was stories like this one.... Although there was that one with a giant red eye in it but, something told me that it would be wise to Not touch it. Are there any more places that it might be?
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:iconbb812:
bb812 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Maybe jen wrote down 6ft 5 by mistake.
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