Sorry it's taken so long for the next update. I have been working on it. I fell into a bit of a slump, but I just got out of it. However, I'll be away from my computer for the next few days, so just be patient a little while longer. PS. Please don't ask when it's coming out (I don't blame those who ask, but it causes more stress than I want for this).-------
I always enjoy learning how to use different mediums. I tried my hand at visual novels. I'm sorry I don't quite know how to upload it here (it's in html5, I believe).
Here's the link: thextra.itch.io/id-card or
I'm going to kind of treat it like this: fav.me/d8coolx where you guys can suggest branches in the story. Here's the current open branches:
1. Testing the Limits
a. Clothes and Hair
b. Not Your Card
2. Asking a Friend
2. Ask a Friend
Summary: Gary suggests to bring over a mutual friend, Rebecca. Rebecca comes over, and they come over to see if the card works with her (it does). One the of the things they say is for Quin to get older. Quinn ages to around 30. They then accidentally say that Quinn looks like he/she is married.
The more detailed the better. Let's see how this goes. This is my first time doing something like this, so it might be a little choppy at times (it might take a little while to load). If there are any issues, let me know and I'll do my best to fix it.
becoming a girl
going from B to D
You forgot to show the card change as Gary becomes Gina
Can we get a compilation of all the Quinn/Catherine ID-cards.
p.s. How old are they ?
P.S. Every time a Save a place, and you do a Up-Date they place doesn't get Up-Dated with he Changes nor the Options
1) "( b. Pregnant )" they change Rebecca into a nurse
2) "( 2. Interesting )" one of the guys wants to stay a girl
3) "( b. Not Your Card )" Can we have them kiss one a other. Please. and then we have to pick Mall OR Beach
3.5) "( b. Not Your Card + Mall )" They meat the guys and they make the Card about them and ...
4) "( 2. Asking a Friend )" Rebecca sees the Card and ask "Is that your Card" then the Card changes to Gary
5) "( b. Not Your Card OR 2. Interesting )" Gina goes to the Bathroom and tacks a Shower
6) Some were some how, they change a girl into a guy
7) "( 1. Flirty )" They want to see a movie, but they are too young, so they change Catherine into a 18 year old, and does the 'Not Your Card' and Catherine changes Gary into a 20 year old
8) "( b. Pregnant )" Catherine ask Rebecca to say that she will fill no pain
9) "( b. Pregnant )" When Gary is born, Catherine can change some part of baby, because the baby is part of her
10) "( ii. Beach )" Catherine meats Girl-3 and Gary some how changes her into Guy-3
11) "( 2. Interesting )" before changing back, they see what tip of girls they can become
12) "( Clothes and Hair )" Quinn/Catherine looks to see if her closes in her dresser and closet have change to
13) "( 2. Interesting )" before changing back they ether go to the Beach or the Pool
14) "( 2. Interesting )" they find Guy-1/Girl-1 with guys buying her stuff
Lots of stuff there; I'll look through each point and see what I can use.
MHM.. How about they want to see a kids movie, but they don't let you go in if you don't have a kid, ...
"( Sometimes I get lazy with the cards )"
Are you going to make one for Guy 1-3 ?
"( Lots of stuff there; I'll look through each point and see what I can use. )"
p.s. You stell have what I said before ?
Thanks; glad you liked it.
I think there is a way to download it already (since I get notifications that people downloaded it) but don't quite know how. I'll be sure to include it in the update notes if you're interested. I wanted to make this VN as accessible as possible, which is why it's in the web browser (I'm just worried about the load time and size at this point).
b. Not Your Card
i. Further changes
Summary: Catherine decides to get some revenge on the now changed Gina as she decides to add some more changes to the newly changed girl, testing out some other aspects of the ID card.
Gina: C-Come on Catherine, let's not be hasty.
Catherine: *Smirks* Oh I will be, now it's my turn to experiment. You have a meek and shy personality and your in sexy underwear
Gina: *Starts blushing as her clothes change into black lingerie bra and panties* W-W-Why w-w-would you d-do this?
Catherine: Well first was to see how sexy your body is now and if I can change your personality. Now then, since you made me have long hair and different eye colors, so now it's my turn. You have hair that goes down to your butt and is bright red and your eyes are also the same shade of red.
Gina: *Hair grows out to her butt and becomes red along with her eyes* W-Why so much? A-And why red?
Catherine: Well you changed my hair and eye color, so I thought we should be even.
Gina: C-Come on Catherine. . .
Catherine: Hmm. . .what to change next?
I've got an idea, but I want to see if it's actually good first.
Keep up the work and good luck.
I just realized... poor Cat... having to figure out how to use the rest room as a lady...
'She would hit me if I even joked about it.' Did that appear on the ID? Or again, is there some RULES about the card we haven't seen yet?
So.... rather than Catherine's child be a clone of her... Gary becomes the father and then is made to go poof? Did the card leave with him? How did 'control' go to Rebecca?
OH! So THAT'S what happened!
If the card was somehow still with Gary... I think Cat would feel something like that poking around her insides, and it wouldn't have made Rebecca the controller.