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ID Card Visual Novel (Update 5) by TheXtra89 ID Card Visual Novel (Update 5) by TheXtra89

Update 1/26/2018

Play game: thextra.itch.io/id-card

Sorry for the long delay. I got a little sidetracked with other stuff, and I stress out needlessly over stories I'm working on. I'm going to try to finish this story within the next little while. Because of that, requests will be closed. I'm going to wrap up each of the storylines and maybe add one or two branches if I have a good idea. I want the updates to be larger from here on out, so there might be a bit more time between each.

Changes this time (I think, I forget exactly where I left off last time):

  • Theater
  • Gina
  • Scenes (from home, you can jump ahead to other scenes)
  • "Under Construction" tags at the end of branches so you can know which ones are not done
  • Windows download (let me know if this doesn't work)

Honestly, I'm a bit lazy, and I didn't work on it too much (but I did a lot of outlining so I have an idea how I want to finish), but I just wanted to let you guys know I'm still alive. I'll try to be better.

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mostly5 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Any idea when the next update comes out?
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Flashkilla Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2018
really nice :)
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NicLove Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What do you think of my suggestions ?
From a moth ago ?


p.s. Why didn't you change the Image ? 
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:iconthextra89:
TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the ideas. I will look back on the previous suggestions to get ideas for the future, but I can't make promises to use them.

I didn't change the image because I was lazy and there weren't too many visual changes that warranted an update.
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NicLove Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ok
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worm53 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2018
YESSSSSSSSSSSS
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zeitgeist1234 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
nice.  I'm excited to see how the theatre ending pans out.
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jgresidenevil Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018  Student Writer
Yo, remember this?

1. Testing the Limits

     b. Not Your Card
       i. Further changes

Summary: Catherine decides to get some revenge on the now changed Gina as she decides to add some more changes to the newly changed girl, testing out some other aspects of the ID card.

Gina: C-Come on Catherine, let's not be hasty.

Catherine: *Smirks* Oh I will be, now it's my turn to experiment. You have a meek and shy personality and your in sexy underwear

Gina: *Starts blushing as her clothes change into black lingerie bra and panties* W-W-Why w-w-would you d-do this?

Catherine: Well first was to see how sexy your body is now and if I can change your personality. Now then, since you made me have long hair and different eye colors, so now it's my turn. You have hair that goes down to your butt and is bright red and your eyes are also the same shade of red.

Gina: *Hair grows out to her butt and becomes red along with her eyes* W-Why so much? A-And why red?

Catherine: Well you changed my hair and eye color, so I thought we should be even.

Gina: C-Come on Catherine. . .

Catherine: Hmm. . .what to change next?
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do remember this. Even though requests are closed, I'm going to be looking back on previous suggestions, but I can't make promises to do everything.
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jgresidenevil Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2018  Student Writer
Ok, I was just curious.
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Team-Ehiro Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
Fantastic! I've  been waiting for the next update!
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goldwyn11 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
Awesoooooome glad to see more from you c:

It's fine if you're slow or busy, if you're worried you could always do statuses or journals to let us know that you're still alive and kung fu kickin c:
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll keep that in mind :)
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NicLove Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's your B-day ?

When ?
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goldwyn11 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
groovy c:

Always wishin ya well bud, hope you have a happy birthday c:
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The-PBG Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
Got to say this has seen a significant improvement - well done XD
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, I tried to make it a bit easier to jump ahead.
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Nathanathan Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
And yesterday, I tought to myself "hey, it's actually been a long time since he updated his game."!
I should think this kind of stuff more often. :D

Thank you for the update!
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So you were the one who gave me the writer's block ;)
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Nathanathan Featured By Owner Edited Jan 27, 2018
Man, don't say things like that! :(

If you need any help with this sort of thing, I would be happy to help!
I've read that when you have a writer block, you write anything that goes trought your mind, even if it's bad or idiotic.
I know they won't be a lot of ideas like that (it's a block, after all), but try to hook on ideas you wouldn't hook to normally.
That way, you'll still train yourself, and inspiration will come faster.
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NicLove Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"( Asking a Friend )"

1) Santa Claus
2) 
one of santa's Elf
3) Snow-woman
4) one of santa's Deer
5) an Angel
6) an Anthro snow-Animal
7) 
Snow Miser or Heat Miser
8)   the Female Grinch
9) someting Christmas that isn't Alive


10) One of them jaysenheadleywrites.files.word…

11) a my little Pony O.C.

12) Magic-Girl-Anime

13) 
Cowgirl

14) Spy Model
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NicLove Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"( Asking a Friend )"

1) Female Devil
2) 80s girl
3) woman with 3 boobs
4) Jungle girl
5) Fembot
6) Harry woman
7) one of there mom
8) fighter
9) contortionist
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NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"( Testing the Limits )"
1) top female, bottome male
2) change the weight
3) Age change
4) Change her tast
5) change her Room
6) Change Body-Shape
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"( Clothes and Hair )"
1) Queen Sindel
2) Anime Hair cloler
3) Bayonetta
4) Rapunzel
5) Cerebella (from SkullGirls)
6) Some other clothes
A) Punk
B) Cheerleader
C) Nerd
D) Contry
E) Hipster
F) Sporty
G) Girly-Girl
H) Tom-Boy
I)Lady-Gaga




"( AFTER Clothes and Hair )"
1) Fair
2) Park
3) Bar or Club
4) Concert or Dance
5) go for Food
6) Jim or Pool
7) Jest a Walk
8) Boling or something like that



"( Mall )"
1) Gets some new cloths (normal)
2) Sexy woman cloths store
3) Game Store
4) Cell-Phone store
5) Walmart
6) Candy store
7) Jewelry store

8) Can only lies
9) ... thinks that the guys are SOOO Hot & Sexy
10) can't stop huging the guys ;-) or falls on them
11) one part of the cloths rips or wind



"(  Interesting )"
1) Gary gets kiss by guy/Girl1
2) one of the guys wants to stay as a girl
3) They stay the night (girl's sleep-over)
4) one of the guys want to try something before changing back
5) all of them starts forgeting that they were guys



"( Beach )"
1) more things on the Beach
2) Catherine loses... her top
3) Catherine driss her self and forgets that Gary is watching
4) one girl is shy, so they change the card do that it's the shy-girl's card and ...
5) Catherine changes back to Quinn will stell being in the bikini
6) Catherine has a chat with a other woman

7) every one less thinks that Quinn has always been Catherine
8) Parents finds out and are one (they always wanted to have a daughter)
9) Gary asked about  Catherine's past
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Try some of these
Different types of TG
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"( Asking a Friend )"
1) Bride
2) Teen age Girl
3) Baby
4) sex alien
5) Nintendo Girl
6) becomes Rebecca's girl-friend
7) Harpy
8) Mythical woman
9) Medusa
10) Artemis
11) Hela

"( Flirty )"
1) Love movie (buy 1 get the second one half if your on a date)
2) Monster movie (Quin hugs Gary out of fear)
3) Funny movie (Quin LOL so hard that ...)
4) R rated movie (theres a sex part)
5) Girl movie (Quin loves it) (or Gary is the one that loves it but not Quin)
6) fighting movie (... a guy doesn't have a shirt on and Quin gets ... you know)
7) kids movie (it's free for moms with child)
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NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
2. Asking a Friend:

A) bunny-girl
B) sexy-vampire
C) girl in wheel chair
D) mermaid
E) fairy
F) hot witch
G) Foxgirl / Kitsune
H) dancer
I) hot sexy hat girl
J) SuperHero
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NicLove Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I) hot sexy Cat girl
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:iconkachopper9000:
What happened? It seemed to be updating consistently and it just sort of... stopped.
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He has to make new images.

Will we wait.
What do you think of my ideals ?
ID Card Visual Novel (Ideals)
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How long untell the update ?
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Raboka Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2017
I like the mall scene with the flirt option i hope you expand more on that
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ever time I'm done with the story, the music starts again.
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jgresidenevil Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2017  Student Writer
Yo, how's it going?
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jgresidenevil Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2017  Student Writer
So, how much longer til the next update?
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll do my best to get it up by Sunday, but no concrete promises.
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NicLove Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
now, what is the date for the next update ?
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jgresidenevil Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2017  Student Writer
I understand
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:iconniclove:
NicLove Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
p.s. You forgot to change the weight is some parts.
Getting shorter
becoming a girl
going from B to D
...
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NicLove Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"( b. Not Your Card )"
You forgot to show the card change as Gary becomes Gina

Can we get a compilation of all the Quinn/Catherine ID-cards.

p.s. How old are they ?

P.S. Every time a Save a place, and you do a Up-Date they place doesn't get Up-Dated with he Changes nor the Options



1)  "( b. Pregnant )" they change Rebecca into a nurse

2) "( 2. Interesting )" one of the guys wants to stay a girl

3) "( b. Not Your Card )" Can we have them kiss one a other. Please.  and then we have to pick  Mall OR Beach
3.5) "( b. Not Your Card + Mall )" They meat the guys and they make the Card about them and ...

4) "( 2. Asking a Friend )" Rebecca sees the Card and ask "Is that your Card" then the Card changes to Gary

5) "(  b. Not Your Card OR 2. Interesting )" Gina goes to the Bathroom and tacks a Shower

6) Some were some how, they change a girl into a guy

7) "( 1. Flirty )" They want to see a movie, but they are too young, so they change Catherine into a 18 year old, and does the 'Not Your Card' and Catherine changes Gary into a 20 year old

8) "( b. Pregnant )" Catherine ask Rebecca to say that she will fill no pain

9) "( b. Pregnant )" When Gary is born, Catherine can change some part of baby, because the baby is part of her

10) "( ii. Beach )" Catherine meats Girl-3 and Gary some how changes her into Guy-3

11) "( 2. Interesting )" before changing back, they see what tip of girls they can become

12) "( Clothes and Hair )" Quinn/Catherine looks to see if her closes in her dresser and closet have change to

13) "( 2. Interesting )" before changing back they ether go to the Beach or the Pool

14) "( 2. Interesting )" they find Guy-1/Girl-1 with guys buying her stuff
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The two characters are 20 years old (roommates, I don't believe I've clarified that). Sometimes I get lazy with the cards; I'll eventually make one for Gina. Yeah, when I do an update, it completely replaces the old version, so it shouldn't keep the save file (I don't know a way around it). I guess it's the cost of playing it while it's being created.

Lots of stuff there; I'll look through each point and see what I can use.
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NicLove Featured By Owner Edited Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"( The two characters are 20 years old  )" 
MHM.. How about they want to see a kids movie, but they don't let you go in if you don't have a kid, ...



"( Sometimes I get lazy with the cards )" 
Are you going to make one for Guy 1-3 ?



"( Lots of stuff there; I'll look through each point and see what I can use. )"
Thanks



p.s. You stell have what I said before ?
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There's probably not going to be very many kids in this one. There's no reason to make a card for them if the card's not linked to them (it might eventually, but not right now). I have a list of everything suggested to me. I don't really think about who sent it, but just direction I think would be enjoyable to write/draw (I'm selfish that way).
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NicLove Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
K
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Homerman76 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I like the call back to some of your previous transformed characters with that "interesting" route.  Really can't wait to see more of this, always love your work :D
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah, I had fun with that one. Though, if I keep on using those characters, I might actually have to have more than one expression.

Thanks; glad you liked it.
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Dannykowalczik Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017
nice job on the VN i enjoyed what i was reading doing and great job from what i was a able to read so far nice job on the art and spelling. i have played a ton of VN i enjoyed what you have made so far i was wondering when your done making it are you going to make it so you can download it or are you going to keep it a web VN but anyway great work so far
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for reading it. Always nice to hear.

I think there is a way to download it already (since I get notifications that people downloaded it) but don't quite know how. I'll be sure to include it in the update notes if you're interested. I wanted to make this VN as accessible as possible, which is why it's in the web browser (I'm just worried about the load time and size at this point).
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Dannykowalczik Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017
i see your point i have helped some in the making of indie VNs coding can be a pain to deal with when making and writing a VN but from what i read of your VN was well made i saw very few flaw and almost no misspells but making it downloadable would make it so more people know of your work and can play and enjoy it offline and it can also help by making it not web browser but one you can and can't play online cause some can take and show others your work one of the best ways to get started is by word of mouth believe it or not but at one time there were very few VNs in English it wasn't till by word of mouth that they started selling and becoming alot easier to find in a language you can read just a business tip to give about the plus of making it downloadable and offline playable but great job on your work
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TheXtra89 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the advice; I'm very ignorant of the already established community, so anything I learn of what is the best option is a plus. There is an option to make a windows/iOS/etc version. I'll see what I can do there in the next update.
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Dannykowalczik Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2017
that is fine no one if perfect i was just trying to help one of the most type of software i have met VN user and maker use is windows cause it is easy to customize your pc for VNs to work for it the first version to make of the VN to download would be for windows 7 cause alot of  people i know use widows 7 cause it is easier to use and make for pc so the first version you make should be for windows and if you want if your just starting make your first VN a free download to play then your next seeing how well you do you can make it payable cause you have made your first and is now known plus if you want to know of a VN that was good that the team started a free game was the sunriders VNs the first was free then after it became known there next sunrider games became payable and they are good VNs so there is some tips for you PM me if you want to learn more about VNs and we can talk
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